Indomitus, Pre-heresy Deathguard Terminator (update: new pics)

Can a mighty Nightlord Terminator go back in the past, turn loyalist and become a pre-heresy Deathguard? Yes, he can:

At the beginning this miniature had to become an Adeptus Titanicus Knight, then a truescale Crimson Fist, but I've always wished a Horus Heresy Deathguard in my collection.  
So, here you are my new conversion/renovation:

Tallarn Highlanders refer to him as Indomitus (they misunderstand his armour's name):

Before the paint:

One of the initial plans: